Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Air Soft Golden Desert Eagle What Should The Title Of My Story Be?

What should the title of my story be? - air soft golden desert eagle

He is a young woman named Marilyn (Call Lynnie the family), whose brother went to fight in the war. Years later, still not returned, and he needs to find her. I think "Heaven Back Home" and "Send Me Down a Miracle", but all suggestions are welcome. Notes: uneducated, is 13, poor, etc.

Here is a brief excerpt from the beginning:

Saturday was always a Saturday. At least it is during this time of year. A light drizzle hit the roof and the smell of rain hanging in the air like an orange with gold leaf floating in old trees. Our picturesque town is calm, nothing today. Even the rustle of the leaves were red like a whisper, soft as a lullaby soft. It was autumn, her favorite season, when we saw the birds fly south, and dancing after an eternity in the soft blue sky.

(This is not just talk a reminder, Marilyn.)

Critics are also welcome. Thank you for your time. :)

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